position papers
Women in World History

Papers are arranged from most to least recent. Model papers from a previous year’s course are listed at the end.

Ancient Egypt | 26 January | Leslie Spear

After reading the works of Hughes and Hughes, Ward, and Pomeroy, it seems as though all the information is congruent in the readings. The facts presented in Hughes and Hughes that also exist in the works by Pomeroy and Ward. The repetition solidifies the facts as stated by all three authors. The reoccurrence between the three pieces shows similarities. The similarities show the reader the strength of the information. Women of ancient Egypt had some of the same rights as men, they could rule as long as they showed some masculine traits to help the people understand why they were in power.
        In Ward and Pomeroy’s texts, there is information that the Egyptian women had the same legal rights as the Egyptian men. “The women of the family could not only administer the family property, but could also dispute legal decisions and be major litigants defending what they conceived to be their rights of inheritance” (Ward 7). The women of ancient Egypt were able to accomplish a lot on their own. It was possible for fathers to leave property to their daughters in their wills so that the daughter could be self sufficient, should the need arise. A wife could even help run the estate with her husband. Women were also allowed to attend parties where men were present. This was an uncommon practice that women of ancient times were not allowed to do, the women would have to leave the room. Traditionally women were not allowed to be seen in the presence of a group of men, except in the case of the women of ancient Egypt.
        Aside from social privileges, women were also granted economic privileges. Traditionally a wife would be dependent upon her husband for economic support, however the women of ancient Egypt were not completely dependent.
Should a divorce take place, the legal system moved in to assure a fair settlement….First, the husband and wife each took back whatever property they had contributed at the time of marriage. Second, any additional property that had accrued during the marriage was divided between them: two-thirds to the husband, one-third to the wife. In this way, the woman became financially independent, did not have to return to her own family, and might even be considered a good prospect for a second marriage (Ward 7).
The division of property was important because the women were allowed to have their own lives after marriage. Ancient Egyptian women were not a complete dependant on their husbands, she could own her own property, and she could make money on her own. Independent women could survive in ancient Egypt.
        One of the most famous characters of ancient Egypt was a woman Pharaoh by the name of Cleopatra VII, commonly known today as Cleopatra. Cleopatra became queen when she was just eighteen years old, and all it took for her to be queen was to marry her ten year old brother, Ptolemy XIII. In order to rule in a male dominated society, there needed to be a male sitting on the throne. It was not necessary for a female to share the throne. She was allowed to rule until her brother matured enough to take over the throne, by the time that her brother was deemed ready to take the throne, Cleopatra VII had arranged a successful administration and she raised an army to fight her brother for the throne. At that time, Caesar was gaining power. During a trip to Egypt, he told Cleopatra and her brother to share the responsibilities of the throne. After the death of her brother Ptolemy XIII, who died in battle, Cleopatra had to marry her other brother Ptolemy XIV, who was eleven at the time. Thus, she could maintain her power. Cleopatra was considered a very shrewd ruler, she knew how to manipulate people to do what she wanted and she knew how to maintain her power until she was forced to commit suicide. “When her handmaiden Charmion described Cleopatra’s death perfectly as ‘fitting for the descendant of so many kings,’ she used the masculine form of the Greek word for ‘descendant’” (Pomeroy 28). The manner of her death was very important to the people of ancient Egypt due to the masculine image their female rulers presented. Another instance is Hatshepsut, who reigned from about 1473 BCE to 1458 BCE and when she ruled “she was publicly portrayed as male. Male pronouns were used and statues depicted her with a beard and dressed in a male kilt, although with breasts. Evidently she had to become a cross-dresser on official occasions. This engendering a female ruler as male is frequently found in societies when female political authority is an anomaly” (Hughes and Hughes 29). In both instances, the female rulers had to show some form of masculinity due to the nature in which they ruled. This masculine image is an explanation for how well they did in power as if the people of ancient Egypt saw their female rulers as males.
        The women needed to show that they had the ability to control their own destiny, they could own land, they could go to court and fight for what was theirs, and they could even rule a country. The women of ancient Egypt had some freedoms that were not given to many other women of the same time period. All three authors have the same central opinion and facts in their texts. While women of ancient Egypt had some freedoms, they still had to conform to what the ancient Egyptian society wanted in order to rule effectively.
 
Works Cited
Hughes, Sarah Shaver, and Brady Hughes. Women in World History: Volume 1—Readings from Prehistory
        to 1500
. Armonk, New York: M.E. Sharpe, 1995.
Pomeroy, Sarah B. Women in Hellenistic Egypt: from Alexander to Cleopatra. Detroit: Wayne State
        University Press, 1990.
Ward, William A. Lecture, Brown University. 21 June 1995.


model papers
The following position papers were the best of those written by students in a previous year’s class.

Model paper #1: This paper, presented on the day we discussed modern East Asia, received an A.

        During the revolutionary period in China from 1921 to 1934, although there were undercurrents of an actual feminist movement, according to Kay Ann Johnson in Women, the Family & Peasant Revolution in China, women’s progress resulted more as a necessity of the war than the leadership’s commitment to emancipate women. Furthermore, when tension arose between men and women, the leadership usually appeased men over women. By not discussing the mentality of the political parties and the dynamics of the war, Hughes and Hughes’ critique lacks an explanation of the underlying motives that drove these parties to sometimes support women and other times reject women’s interests. Hughes and Hughes explain that “male educators and members of the KMT now proclaimed Chinese women emancipated” (H&H 237). However, Johnson’s critique paints quite a different and more complex emancipation.
        The philosophies of the Chinese Communist Party (CCP) reflected undertones of feminist thought and consideration. The CCP’s ideology developed in the early twentieth century as a result of a radical intellectual movement in urban areas composed of disillusioned students and professors. The CCP did recognize women’s progressive demands and desires for equal rights. In 1922, at the Second National Congress, the Party established the Women’s Department which aided women’s revolutionary political activity (Johnson 41). The Manifesto of the Second Congress responded to women’s groups such as the Woman Suffrage Alliance and the Alliance for the Women’s Rights Movements by including objectives such as “the limited right to vote for all workers and peasants, regardless of sex, [and] protection for female and child labor” (Johnson 41). Hughes and Hughes do not overlook women’s voice during this period between 1921 to 1934; “women’s emancipation was an essential part of the reform program of Chinese intellectuals” (H&H 236). Hughes and Hughes refer to the Guomindang (KMT), another revolutionary party, that issued demands “for equality between the sexes, permission for women to inherit property, [and] free marriage and divorce” (H&H 236).
        However, Hughes and Hughes do not fully explain the tensions and underlying reasons for the CCP’s support of women. Johnson, on the other hand, argues that from the onset, the “Party distrusted the feminist groups themselves as elitist, bourgeois reformers” (Johnson 40). Therefore, any progress made by the Party in favor of women was not true emancipation but emancipation disguised under ulterior motives. Instead, the Party deemed women’s reforms advantageous to their political strategy and position in the war. For example, after 1928, the Communists policies were aimed at increasing women’s activities that supported the war effort and the economy. It became important for the Party to win women’s support because women were able to affect men’s decisions. Sometimes women would attempt to dissuade their husbands or sons from joining the army. Therefore, by gaining women’s support, men’s participation in the army would increase. In addition, being able to teach women agricultural duties greatly increased the availability of men for battle. Thus, a successful war effort meant that the Party was able “to tap the resources of the entire family unit. This made women a key link in war mobility and support” (Johnson 52). Hughes and Hughes only explain that “the party…ordered women members to support the civil war with the Guomindang” (H&H 237). Hughes and Hughes also comment that “women active[ly] participat[ed] in revolutionary movements” (H&H 232). Although these statements are quite valid, they lack any analysis of the actual dynamics between the revolutionary parties and women’s interests as stated above.
        Furthermore, whenever tension developed between gender groups, the men were most often appeased rather than the women. For example, as a result of the women’s movement, peasant men felt threatened. Peasant men normally bought their wife in a traditional manner by paying bridewealth. This traditional idea of marriage and family meant that men had some control over their “female property” (Johnson 55). The new women’s movement threatened this traditional power structure. Furthermore, men now worried that as a result of the Marriage Regulations, their wife may file for divorce during their leave of absence as a soldier (Johnson 60). Men argued that they should not have “to worry about losing their wives” at the same time they were risking their lives (Johnson 60). In the end, Mao Zedong, a leader of the communist movement, “like most of the leaders,… sought to resolve conflict by downplaying, compromising or moderating efforts to promote women’s struggle against traditional male and family authority” (Johnson 60). Mao found himself in a bind; he was initially a supporter of the women’s movement but also understood the male peasants’ desire to sustain dignity while at war. Mao ultimately supported the clause against the divorce rights of army men’s wives (Johnson 60). Hughes and Hughes refer to Mao Zedong as one who “supported women’s issues even before [he] became communist” (H&H 236). Nothing further is mentioned of Mao and his ultimate support of peasant men over women. Hughes and Hughes provide only half the story of Mao Zedong. The eliminated half is quite significant since it shows that women’s interests were often compromised to appease men’s wishes.
        What were the goals of the political parties during this era, goals which inherently affected women? The CCP strove to preserve unity; the Party issued statements emphasizing the necessity of maintaining “a unified working class” (Johnson 55). As a political entity, the CCP had invested interest in attaining the approval of the masses in order to create unity, especially during war times. In fact, “disunity seemed more immediate and crucial to leaders than the long term cause of developing women’s political power or enforcing women’s rights” (Johnson 49). Women’s rights fell second to the desires for political power. Many times sustaining unity meant advocating a middle-ground policy - appealing a little to this group and a little to that group. It is politically wise therefore, for the CCP not to adhere one-hundred percent to the women’s movement in fear of losing some support from other groups. For example, when the CCP and KMT joined in alliance, the Central Women’s Department formed. This organization, headed under Ho Hsiang-ning, aimed to bring women into the revolutionary movement and aimed to obtain recognition of women’s rights from the Nationalist government (Johnson 44). However, at the same time, men felt increasingly threatened by women’s aggrandizement. Therefore, male peasant leaders were incorporated into the women’s movement and “the result of this effort to appease male fears was to place women’s organizations more closely under the control of those most likely to oppose women’s efforts” (Johnson 47). Johnson explained that “while the Party generally espoused the democratic demands of these [women’s] groups, it did not seek to establish organizational ties with them” (41). Hughes and Hughes do not mention the tension and contradiction that existed within the CCP as the Party aimed to gain the support of the masses, including men and women. Therefore, by only reading Hughes and Hughes, it is quite difficult to understand why, for example, the KMT turned on the CCP, viciously attacked and raped women, and “began redefining women’s roles [as] a return to the virtues of the family” (H&H 236). Without knowledge of the struggle to attain men and women’s approval, such a vicious turn of events seems quite startling.
        Women’s situation and progress during the revolution was quite complex. Although women did gain some freedoms, the freedoms gained were backed by the underlying motives of the political parties to increase their power in the war. Thus, it is difficult to assess whether women did attain emancipation since emancipation under such a politically charged atmosphere seems rather tainted. In addition, when conflict arose between men and women, politics usually supported male interests. Hughes and Hughes do not fully illustrate the complex motives that drove these parties to either support or abandon women’s interests in order to maintain political unity. Thus, it is problematic to only read Hughes and Hughes critique because it lacks an in-depth discussion of the complex dynamics during the revolution.

Works Cited
Hughes, Sarah Shaver and Brady Hughes. Women in World History: Readings from 1500
        to the Present. Vol 2. New York: M.E. Sharpe Inc., 1997.
Johnson, Kay Ann. Women, the Family and Peasant Revolution in China. Chicago: The
        University of Chicago Press, 1983.


Model paper #2: This paper, presented on the day we discussed women’s leadership in early Islam, received an A.

        In the Hughes’ text, Women in World History: Volume 1, the chapter on Middle Eastern women focuses on how Islam affected their lives. Almost immediately, the authors wisely observe that “Muslim women’s rights have varied significantly with time, by region, and by class” (152). They continue with the warning that “there is far too much diversity to be adequately described in a few pages.” However, I argue that there is essential information and insight on said topic that the authors have failed to include, as well as areas of discussion with incomplete analyses. I will use Leila Ahmed’s book, Women and Gender in Islam: Historical Roots of a Modern Debate, as well as her essay entitled “Early Islam and the Position of Women: The Problem of Interpretation,” to cite the shortcomings of the text.
        After the first part of the Hughes chapter on Middle Eastern Muslim women, the emphasis shifts, from Quranic doctrine regarding women to how Muslim law and scholarship have interpreted the Quran’s direct admonitions to women. However, this shift is unfortunately subtle. The authors fail to make a clear distinction between the Quran, a sacred text believed to be the verbatim word of God; and Muslim law, which was formulated by (male) Muslim jurists who consulted the Quran and whose consensus was later declared infallible (Ahmed 58). Such a distinction is necessary because the Quran itself is vastly different from a legal document; Ahmed observes in “Early Islam and the Position of Women” that “Quranic precepts consist mainly of broad, general propositions chiefly of an ethical nature, rather than specific legalistic formulations” (59). Indeed, the Quran’s “ethical injunctions” are open to “radically different interpretations” (62), whereas Muslim law is the result of such interpretation.
        In her essay, Ahmed relies chiefly on the development and eventual permanence of Muslim law to support her thesis, which is that “the process of the creation of Islamic law” must be examined in order to subvert or equalize modern gender roles and gender-specific laws in Muslim societies (71). While the Hughes text is clearly written with a broader goal in mind, the authors are nevertheless providing an incomplete picture by deemphasizing the effects of the legal codification of patriarchy and domination. The authors briefly refer to Muslim law and its divine infallibility, but they say only that “Muslim law required women to remain in seclusion and to be veiled. . .in public, [but] in practice women found ways to gain considerable control over their lives in spite of these restrictions” (162).
        There are many more laws regarding Muslim women, some of which have been interpreted as only superficially positive or negative (Ahmed 63), but how most Muslim women responded to them is not adequately addressed in the text. In her book, Ahmed comments on “the power of suppression that the chroniclers [of early Islam]. . .had”: “there is no record of the reactions of Muhammad’s wives to [veiling and seclusion], a remarkable silence given their articulateness on various topics” (56). This is a very important point, both because it reminds us of history’s traditional exclusion of women’s perspectives and because it stresses the moral autonomy of Muslim women, even as they were deprived of legal autonomy.
        Huda Lufti’s lengthy passage on women in Cairo and Misr is useful in illustrating the discrepancies between law and practice, but its focus on two Egyptian cities is too narrow; the reader should not read the complaints of Ibn al-Hajj and conclude that Muslim law is easily bypassed and that most Muslim women are able to “buck the system.” In fact, the text almost enables this type of generalization by being overly optimistic and by not offering descriptions of the conditions of Muslim women in less flexible locations and times, such as the Abbasid dynasty in Iraq. On the other hand, in Women and Gender in Islam, Ahmed focuses on Abbasid upper-class society in order to identify “the assumptions about women and the relations between the sexes silently informing the texts and interpretations of Islam” (69).
        In her excerpt in the text, Nikki Keddie writes that “we should be aware of how much breaking... of Quranic admonitions there have been throughout Muslim history” (155). She later concludes that “in general the Quran was followed... when it was not inconvenient [for] the patriarchal family to do so, and not followed when it was.” What is never addressed, however, is the difficulty of upholding one “true” interpretation of the Quran (Ahmed 64). If Keddie were to admit to this difficulty, she would not have been able to make the above conclusion quite so neatly.
        The Hughes text oversimplifies Quranic interpretation, thus placing more responsibity for the disenfranchisement of Muslim women squarely on the Quran than is perhaps warranted or fair. Ahmed argues that “interpretation is of necessity part of every act of reading or of inscribing a text” (63); interpretations of the Quran by orthodox Muslims, Muslim lawmakers, and resistance movements are various, with varying implications for women.
        One example of this is the long-standing debate over the fundamental function of the Quran: should Muslims give primacy to the ethical dimension of Muhammad’s teachings, or should they “view the regulations and practices put into effect by Muhammad as... binding on all Muslims” (58)? Orthodox Muslims chose the latter method of interpretation, but alternative movements favored embracing Islam’s “broader spiritual message” and saw regulations set by Muhammad as specific to his society and not of permanent relevance to his followers (65). Thus, the Sufi movement, choosing to embrace Islam’s ethical egalitarianism (58), included women among their spiritual leaders (66). The Sufi woman Rabi’a al-’Adawiyya is particularly notable, the mention of whom is noticeably missing from the Hughes text. In fact, the text seems to solely focus on women within orthodox Muslim societies, and thus is further weakened by neglecting other important interpretations of the message of Islam and the role of these interpretations in gender interactions.
        The Hughes text makes a valiant effort to outline the experiences of women in early Islam within the limited space of one chapter. However, in general, it suffers from either being too broad or too particular in its choice of excerpts and areas of emphasis. In contrast, Leila Ahmed analyzes representations and mores of Muslim women in different social and religious contexts in order to draw conclusions about their effect on women’s--and men’s in relation to women’s--status, in earlier periods of Islam, as well as the further-reaching implications they have had for modern Muslim societies.

Works Cited
Ahmed, Leila. Women and Gender in Islam: Historical Roots of a Modern Debate. New Haven and London:
        Yale University Press, 1992.
Ahmed, Leila. “Early Islam and the Position of Women: The Problem of Interpretation.” In Women in
        Middle Eastern History: Shifting Boundaries in Sex and Gender, ed. Nikki R. Keddie and Beth Baron.
        New Haven and London: Yale University Press, 1991.
Hughes, Sarah Shaver, and Brady Hughes. Women in World History. Vol. 1. Armonk, N.Y., and London:
        M.E. Sharpe, 1995.